How to Write a Job Application Email That Gets You Hired

How to Write a Job Application Email (With Example & Template) | 2024 Guide
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⏱ 8 min read ✉ Email Writing Guide · Chapter 1.1 🎯 Intermediate–Advanced

A step-by-step guide with a real example, vocabulary bank, interactive exercises, and a ready-to-use writing template.

1. What Is a Job Application Email?

A job application email is a formal written message sent to a prospective employer expressing interest in a job vacancy and requesting consideration for the role.

Unlike a cover letter, which is a standalone document, a job application email is the first impression a recruiter forms of you. It must be professional, concise, and compelling enough to make them open your attached CV.

Purpose

A well-crafted job application email has three core objectives:

  • Introduce yourself professionally — establish who you are and why you are writing
  • Highlight relevant qualifications — briefly demonstrate your suitability for the role
  • Request a next step — formally ask for an interview or further conversation
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Pro Tip Recruiters spend an average of 7 seconds reading an application email. Keep it focused, professional, and under 250 words.

2. When to Use a Job Application Email

Send a formal job application email in these situations:

  1. When responding to an advertised vacancy on a job board, company website, or LinkedIn
  2. When making a speculative (unsolicited) application to a company with no advertised role
  3. When a recruiter or headhunter has asked you to submit your CV
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Important For speculative applications, always research the correct contact person — the Hiring Manager or HR Director — rather than a generic inbox.

3. Key Tone & Style Characteristics

A job application email must balance confidence with professionalism. Follow these four principles:

  • Formal and respectful — correct grammar, no contractions (use “I am”, not “I’m”)
  • Confident but not arrogant — back every claim with evidence
  • Concise and action-oriented — every sentence must earn its place
  • Professional vocabulary throughout — no slang, no casual phrasing
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Common Mistake Never open with just “I am writing to apply for this position.” It is vague. Always name the specific role title and where you found the vacancy.

4. Full Professional Example

Study this complete, professionally written job application email before attempting the exercises below.

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Why This Email Works Alexandra names the exact job title, platform, and date in sentence one. She then gives specific evidence — 35% revenue growth and an MBA — rather than vague claims. The email ends with a confident, polite call to action.

5. Email Analysis Questions

Answer each question in the space provided. Use the sample email in Section 4 as your reference.

  • 1
    What is the purpose of this email and how is it established in the opening paragraph? Hint: Look at the first sentence — what specific details are mentioned?
  • 2
    How does the applicant demonstrate her suitability for the role? Identify specific evidence. Hint: Look for quantified results, qualifications, and named tools.
  • 3
    Analyse the subject line. Why is it effective compared to “Job Application”? Hint: Consider specificity, the reference number, and searchability.
  • 4
    What tone does the writer use? Find three words or phrases that reflect this tone.
  • 5
    How does the closing paragraph create a call to action? Is it appropriately assertive? Hint: Compare “I look forward to hearing from you” with passive alternatives.
  • 6
    List at least five examples of professional vocabulary used in the email.
  • 7
    How is the email structured? Would you reorganise any part of it? Why or why not? Hint: Evaluate paragraph order, length, and balance of content.

6. Useful Expressions & Vocabulary

These expressions are essential in professional job application emails. Hover over any phrase to highlight it.

✉ Opening Phrases

I am writing to apply for… I wish to express my interest in… I am delighted to submit my application for… With reference to your advertisement…

🙏 Polite Requests

I would welcome the opportunity to… I would appreciate the chance to discuss… I kindly request your consideration of… Please find attached my CV…

🔗 Formal Connectors

Throughout my career… In addition to… Furthermore, As demonstrated by…

👋 Closing Phrases

I look forward to hearing from you. I am available for an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely,

📚 Professional Vocabulary

proven track record align with strategic goals proficiency in at your earliest convenience speculative application

7. Practice Exercises

Complete all three interactive exercises to reinforce what you have learned.

🔗 Exercise 1: Matching

Select the correct function for each expression, then check your answers.
Expression Your Answer
1 I am writing to apply for…
2 Proven track record
3 I look forward to hearing from you
4 Please find attached
5 At your earliest convenience
6 I am confident that I would be…

✏️ Exercise 2: Fill in the Blanks

Type the correct word or phrase from the vocabulary bank into each blank, then check.
1 I am writing to for the position of Sales Executive at your company.
2 Please my CV and cover letter for your review.
3 I would the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further.
4 I have a track record in project management and team leadership.
5 Thank you for my application. I look forward to your response.

🔀 Exercise 3: Sentence Reordering

Drag the word chips into the correct order to form a professional sentence.

Sentence 1 — rearrange into a correct sentence:

years of six with experience I over marketing in am

→ Drop chips below in the correct order:

I am with over six years of experience in marketing.

Sentence 2 — rearrange into a correct sentence:

find please for attached your CV review my

→ Drop chips below in the correct order:

Please find my CV attached for your review.

Sentence 3 — rearrange into a correct sentence:

confident would addition valuable a I am that I be

→ Drop chips below in the correct order:

I am confident that I would be a valuable addition.


8. Writing Practice Template

Use the template below to write your own complete job application email. Type directly into the fields.

✍️ Your Turn

Write a Job Application Email

📋 Scenario: You are applying for a position as a Data Analyst at TechGlobal Inc., advertised on their website. You have 3 years of experience in data analysis using Python and SQL, and a degree in Computer Science. Write a complete, professional job application email.

Subject Line

Greeting

Opening Paragraph — State purpose & where you found the role

Body — Your Qualifications & Achievements

Closing & Call to Action

Sign-off & Signature

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Self-Assessment Checklist ✓ Did I name the exact job title? ✓ Did I include specific evidence of my skills? ✓ Did I mention my attached CV? ✓ Did I end with a clear call to action? ✓ Is my tone formal and professional throughout?

9. Frequently Asked Questions

What should I write in a job application email?

Include: a specific subject line with role title and reference number; a formal greeting with the recruiter’s name; an opening sentence naming the exact role and where you found it; a paragraph on your qualifications and quantifiable achievements; a reference to your attached CV; a polite call to action requesting an interview; a formal sign-off and your full professional signature.

How long should a job application email be?

Keep it under 250–300 words across three to four short paragraphs. The detail belongs in your CV and cover letter. The email’s job is to intrigue the recruiter enough to open your attachments.

What is the best subject line for a job application email?

Include: the job title, reference number (if available), and your name. Example: “Application for Marketing Manager Position – Ref: MM2024-07 – Alexandra Chen.” This makes it easy for the recruiter to identify, search, and file your email.

Should I say “Dear Sir/Madam” if I don’t know the recruiter’s name?

Always try to find the correct name first — check the job posting, LinkedIn, or the company website. If you genuinely cannot find one, use “Dear Hiring Manager” rather than the outdated “Dear Sir/Madam.”

What is the difference between “Yours sincerely” and “Yours faithfully”?

In British English: use “Yours sincerely” when you know the person’s name (Dear Ms. Thompson). Use “Yours faithfully” when you do not (Dear Hiring Manager). In American English, “Sincerely” covers both situations.

Can I reuse the same email for different companies?

No. Always customise the company name, job title, reference number, and at least one sentence that references something specific about the company. Generic emails are spotted immediately and significantly reduce your chances of a reply.

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